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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:53 pm

Oh....Anyway I still have to finish the sketches...Although I lost the first sketch eheheh...I think Tolentino has it...but I'm not sure if he still has it..

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The darkness caught me...that was when it all ended. And now, this is my new beginning. I am not Death...my Name is Leo Grant Krazelberd...and I'm a Celestial Slayer. And these are Mentu and Onuris.
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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Sat Aug 25, 2007 2:46 pm

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(Not in THE CT Team but included in the story!)
Name: Kitsune, Miyabi
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Age: 15
Birthdate: July 14, 1992
Astrological Sign: Cancer
Chinese Zodiac Sign: Monkey
Blood Type: B
Height: 4" 11'
Beliefs/Religion: Christian/Catholic
Hobby:
Throwing a party(usually with Ichigo but now with Leo)
Playing Cards
Poker
Outing with friends(usually with other girls)
Shopping
Cracking jokes with Leo/Ichigo
Designing Clothings
Studying

Basic Description:
The long lost friend of Ichigo. A rich cute elegant girl(Obviously beautiful)

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Current Information
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Family background:
Both her family and Ichigo's were friends. The main reason why they were friends. Unfortunately after the massacre her family quickly left Japan and went to Philippines without confirming if nobody survived the massacre. They were known as one of the golden family in both Philippines and Japan. (golden rich)

Birth place:Nagasaki, Japan

History, background:
She was born in a wealthy family. Her family was one of the "5 gods of money" also known as the golden families. Even though she was very rich and obviously popular, she became a friend of the whole "Wolf Clan". The "Wolf Clan" was also considered as one of the god clans found in Japan. They were considered as the strongest clan until the betrayal of the 5 Captains. One of the Captains was the assassin who killed another captain who was Ichigo's father. Her family quickly fled to the Philippines because of the Book of Prophecy which was read by Miyabi's mother. According to the book of Prophecy, that they had to go to the Philippines and find the 3 statues of the celestial beasts. After they reached the Philippines her family started the search but she just stayed in her room crying every night which continued for 3 months until she met Leo.

Home: Mansion in Nagasaki,Japan. Mansion in Makati City.

Possesions, make-up, jewelry, etc.: Necklace given by Ichigo on her 5th birthday and a bracelet given by Leo when he found her crying.

Pets: N/A

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Physical Description
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Hair style: Straight with bangs

Eyes: Black

Body: Slinky/Sexy

Physical condition: Normal

Marks,scar,tattoo: N/A

Clothing: Kimono/ School uniform/ Casual


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Personality
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Likes: Books, Necklace, Bracelets, Ichigo, Leo, Accessories

Dislikes: Icky Things, Leo (doesn't seem to laugh at her jokes)

Fears: To lose another friend( Leo Grant Krazelberd )

Goals: To live on the family legacy

Occupation: Student

Favorite food: Sweets, Candy, Cakes, Vegetables

Least favorite food: Tomato

Most prized possesion (important or emotional value): Gifts from both Ichigo and Leo

Vernacular (way of speaking): Japanese (Real Language), English(Language of now)

Psychological condition: normal

Character behaviour: Cute, Admirable, Sweet, Elegant and Corny (from Leo...)

Aptitude: Reasoning and Strategies

Social and other pressure, problems: N/A

Relationships (with who and what kind)
Ichigo (Long Lost Friend)
Leo (Best Friend of the Present)
Hazel von CrystalForge (Friend)

Beliefs, superstition, moral value:
"I will not allow another friend to leave me!" , "Death is not the end"

Positive characteristics:
Popular
Cute
Intelligent
Strategist
Elegant
Beautiful
Doesn't get angry easily (with other people except Leo)

Negatives characteristics:
Scary when angry
(Leo: She is very scary...
Miyabi: What DID YOU SAY?!
Leo: Nothing...Mam! I gotta go! )

Personality:
Sweet and Friendly

Other: Most popular girl in Town

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Abilities
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Physical:
N/A

Magical:
N/A

Other:
Expert Strategist
Expert Reasoner

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Here's another update! I'm still thinking who will be her partner...would it be Leo or Ichigo

Well, I'll just think about it after I finish the profiles! UPDATE!

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The darkness caught me...that was when it all ended. And now, this is my new beginning. I am not Death...my Name is Leo Grant Krazelberd...and I'm a Celestial Slayer. And these are Mentu and Onuris.
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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Sat Aug 25, 2007 4:05 pm

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(First member of the CT team)
Name: Leo Grant Krazelberd
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: 15
Birthdate: August 17, 1992
Astrological Sign: Leo
Chinese Zodiac Sign: Monkey
Blood Type: A
Height: 5" 7'
Beliefs/Religion: Christian/Catholic
Hobby:
Computer Gaming
Programming
Reading Books
Sleeping
Listening to music
Drawing
Photo-editing
Roaming around the net(Hacker)
Training

Basic Description:
One of the five computer geniuses of CT or Computer Technology. A character who likes challenges.

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Current Information
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Family background:
The Krazelberd family is just a normal family in the eyes of the public. Their real history is not known by other people. They appear during the first year of Leo in High School. Formerly called "Bladefury" for their unique skills in wielding a blade but they were forced to kill every single people who knew about their history for they were assigned to hide the 3 statues of the celestial beasts. Although their history was totally erased, the books of prophecy were not burned where their history was told but their identity was not told directly.

Birth place: Makati, Philippines

History, background:
No records about their past history was known to the public. Everything about his history was known by other people at the start of his first year high school. He was immediately considered as a genius. His whole batch was considered "the batch of geniuses". He was very popular when it comes to computer programming. He met Miyabi in his way home after riding a jeepney. When you was about to ride another jeepney he saw her in the bench on the other side crying. Instead of riding the jeepney, he went to Miyabi and comforted her. That was when he also gave her a jewel bracelet which would most likely cost about 1m pesos. And from that day on Miyabi would go directly to DBTI-Makati where she would wait for him to come out.

Home: A house in Sta Ana,Manila

Possesions, make-up, jewelry, etc.: Choker, bracelet, watch, id pass(entrance in Miyabi's house), Two blades of the gods (Onuris and Mentu) and foot weights.

Pets: Raven, a dog and a ferret

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Physical Description
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Hair style: Bangs, spikey back

Eyes: Black

Body: Agile-type

Physical condition: Normal

Marks,scar,tattoo: Celestial Beast symbol in shoulder when in celestial form. Tattoos appear in neck connected to the face when he can't control is spirit force and when physical mana and celestial force overflows.

Clothing: School Uniform, Long-sleeve polo with sleeveless shirt inside(somehow like a lab gown) (Fighting), Collar on neck(seperate from shirt) Black lab gown like clothing with japan like uniform with hood (like death clothes) and a sleeveless shirt with arm band with black gloves (Celestial Slayer Form)


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Personality
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Likes: Comics, Novels, Drawings, Computers, Free time(school), food, and Challenges

Dislikes: Boring Movies, Boring Outings, Annoying girls, Boastful guys, The irritating Ichigo

Fears: Someone he protects dies, To fail the family tasks, To lose

Goals: To stop the collision of the two worlds according to the book of Disasters, To protect everyone I love

Occupation: Student, Celestial Slayer, Substitute Grim Reaper(or Death)

Favorite food: Spicy foods and Sweets

Least favorite food: Potato and eggs

Most prized possesion (important or emotional value): Two blades of the gods (Onuris and Mentu)

Vernacular (way of speaking): English

Psychological condition: normal

Character behaviour: Active childish yet Righteous

Aptitude: Sword-wielding, Speed, Handicrafts

Social and other pressure, problems: Pressure in three different jobs(Celestial Slayer, Substitute Death, Student)

Relationships (with who and what kind)
Ichigo (Rival)
Felix Grandeur,Enric von Crystalforge,Angelo Grayford,Elias von Crazer (Who are those?)
Miyabi Kitsune (Best Friend)
Hazel von CrystalForge (Friend)

Beliefs, superstition, moral value:
"Death is not the end. Its my awakening.", "To lose is a disgrace to my clan." , "I'd rather die than use my blade to cause bloodshed.", "I'd even sacrifice my pride for Balance."

Positive characteristics:
Popular
Intelligent
Leader
Active
Fair
Kind
Friendly
Comfortable to be with (Miyabi)

Negatives characteristics:
Deadly when serious
Lazy
Not attentive in class
Murder machine when out of control
Idiot(Ichigo...Ouch)
Weakling (Enric)

Personality:
Kind, friendly and smiley personality

Other: N/A

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Abilities
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Physical:
Energy focused attacks (500% stronger than the strongest man)
Melee-combat specialist
Energy Deflection
Gigantic amount of Mana and Spirit Force
Equal speed with Ichigo (Normal Form)
500% faster than Ichigo (Celestial Form)
Unique Techniques in Sword Wielding
High Countering Skills
Anti-weapon Specialist (only when in use of swords)
Hand crafting
Blade fury (one of techiniques in swordwielding)

Magical:
Illusionary Magic
Celestial Magic
Death Magic
Computer skills of most CT team
Summon Deathly Hollow (Horse of Death)
Spirit Mode

Other:
Computer Genius
Drawing
Combat-Analyzer

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Updated Ichigo's Skills...BTW, the assassin found in my gallery is somehow related to the face of Ichigo. Generally I made him to be him but since I found certain mistakes I had to make another one for every single character. The hair is what I'm referring as a mistake!

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The darkness caught me...that was when it all ended. And now, this is my new beginning. I am not Death...my Name is Leo Grant Krazelberd...and I'm a Celestial Slayer. And these are Mentu and Onuris.
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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Mon Aug 27, 2007 12:05 am

UP!

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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Mon Aug 27, 2007 4:19 pm

Finally! I now know who Leo Grant Krazelberd is. I hear (actually read) that name from you often but I couldn't relate cuz I don't know him.

Question: How many Books of (insert here) are there?
(book of prophecy, book of disasters. .....)
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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Wed Aug 29, 2007 2:53 pm

I still have more and still adding! Although I'm not sure if I'm gonna approve most of it luckily I have Mr. Bruce Magpantay who was able to help me in making the storyline which includes many more of the books. And yet I still have more to add!

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The darkness caught me...that was when it all ended. And now, this is my new beginning. I am not Death...my Name is Leo Grant Krazelberd...and I'm a Celestial Slayer. And these are Mentu and Onuris.
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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Thu Aug 30, 2007 12:15 am

Can i join in the manga? or something?

because recently i feel like i want to do something rather than studying in front of my computer. -___- Zzz...Zzz...Zzz...Zzz...Zzz

but i'm still thinking of a name that suits both my personality and taste.
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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Thu Aug 30, 2007 12:30 am

well, as I always say! Anyone is welcome to join! I never prohibited anyone to join especially if it would certainly shorten my job when you add some more profiles! I would I deny a request that would help me out!

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The darkness caught me...that was when it all ended. And now, this is my new beginning. I am not Death...my Name is Leo Grant Krazelberd...and I'm a Celestial Slayer. And these are Mentu and Onuris.
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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Thu Aug 30, 2007 10:05 pm

ok........
so to put it simply,
anyone can join,right?

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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Thu Aug 30, 2007 10:17 pm

So... if blancada decides to join.... would you let him?
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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Fri Aug 31, 2007 4:04 am

How about outsiders?

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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Fri Aug 31, 2007 6:03 pm

Why not? I didn't make this story just for the CT team. I made this so that I could waste my time on something worth it!

So anyone can join...nerds, geeks, stupid, idiots, weirdos, artists, musicians, demons, monsters, ghosts...as long as the profile is good and could easily be related to the story it's fine. And surely the profile has to be good!

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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Fri Aug 31, 2007 7:11 pm

Oh.. I see. I'll try to make another profile
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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Fri Aug 31, 2007 7:33 pm

Well, thank you then! After all, every profile that are approved means that it lessened my work!

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The darkness caught me...that was when it all ended. And now, this is my new beginning. I am not Death...my Name is Leo Grant Krazelberd...and I'm a Celestial Slayer. And these are Mentu and Onuris.
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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Fri Aug 31, 2007 10:59 pm

ok.....

anyway i'll start thinking of a profile right now!






after playing 3 winning matches of DOTA,
2 team battle of CC3:Tiberium Wars....
so on and so forth......
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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Sat Sep 01, 2007 1:12 am

Ok, sure I'll finish some more...I've started thinking of more Family names for the characters.

Here are some:
Limpheus
Grizen
Asvenzerg
Hajial
Zymerus

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The darkness caught me...that was when it all ended. And now, this is my new beginning. I am not Death...my Name is Leo Grant Krazelberd...and I'm a Celestial Slayer. And these are Mentu and Onuris.
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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Mon Sep 03, 2007 6:31 pm

cyberchaos: You play CC3? Neat! What do you use?
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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Mon Sep 03, 2007 6:59 pm

Don't talk about that here please...this isn't the gamer's section ^_^

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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Tue Sep 04, 2007 8:20 pm

yeah this isn't the game section just create a thread about it...
C&C3:Tiberium War!!!
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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Sat Sep 22, 2007 7:33 pm

ERASED! PLEASE VIEW THE OTHER PAGE!

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The darkness caught me...that was when it all ended. And now, this is my new beginning. I am not Death...my Name is Leo Grant Krazelberd...and I'm a Celestial Slayer. And these are Mentu and Onuris.
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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Sat Sep 22, 2007 7:33 pm

Update!
Quotes which lead the middle part of the storyline. The beginning of the Apocalypse. (idea from the book of Revelations)

Spoilers:(objects, materials in story)

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A false prophet has shown indicating that he was the savior who once ruled the lands of man. He wore a white robe. His face was covered with a hood and a crown was sitting on top of his head. He carried an extremely beautiful white bow which had diamonds on both end. He showed it to me. I felt the peace which hugged me as he asked me to hold it for him. I felt safe just seeing his face. He told "Son, I have come to conquer man. And I am in need of your help? Would you lend me a hand?" Thinking that he was the Savior I immediately thought of saying yes but to my surprise I denied his request. He turned his back from me and left. I stand there alone thinking why I said "No". Until three other horsemen, passed me by. -1st Apocalyptic Horseman "The AntiChrist"

I was able to read the symbols on their shoulders which came as follows "War", "Famine" and "Death". I was in total shock seeing their faces and their horses. Only at that point where in I heard a voice "I was the one who denied his request. Now that you have come to your sense and are now finally able to hear my voice." Then an angel appeared upon me and spoke " Hear me out oh noble king! I am the messenger of the Divine. He who spoke to you earlier which was followed by the other 3 horsemen was the Antichrist. He was one of the 4 Apocalyptic Horsemen which has come to destroy the land you dwell in. He is a false prophet who has come to take the souls of humans to be made as his warriors for the Final Battle. The apocalypse has finally begun and we are in need of help from the 8th Kingdom. You, as the king, has been chosen to lead your army which is accompanied by the armies of the 7 Heavens."

"Me? A King? You have got to be kidding me! I should really wake up now." I said to myself

"You are the king of the Celestial Grounds which is known as the "Kingdom of Vergil" also known as the "8th kingdom"."

To my surprise, he was able to read my mind.

"I heed your answer! Speak quickly for we have no time to waste!" Said the angel

"Yes! I will help." My mouth moved on it's own. As the angel vanish, I heard another voice. I looked around yet I don't see anyone.

"Over here!" A voice behind me said. I turned my head and was in total shock. I saw myself although in a noble costume.

"It is time to remember me. As the prophecy said, "The kingdom of 8th will lead the war against the 7 kingdoms of Hell. It is up to the king to decide the faith of humanity. The final hour has come and the demons now dwell in the hearts of the sinners." "

At that point, he disappeared. And I began to see images of my past life.

----End for now----

I saw spilled blood in the ground. I followed the track of blood thinking that I might see my friends. To my surprise I found thousands of dead bodies. I heard a scream of young lady. I followed her. She was stabbed by a sword which was left on her chest. I felt a sudden pain in my chest. I felt what she has experienced. I felt the blade sinking into my chest. I kneel down thinking that the pain would fade away. My eye began to turn red. I knew it was blood in my eye. I heard the scream of others which was now being killed. -The second apocalyptic horseman: War

Food has become scarce. Herbs and medicines has finally run out. Great hunger has taken over the kingdom of man. Prices have ranked up. The poor are now dieing from hunger. Millions have died from an unknown sickness. Billions have died from hunger. Only the rich have survived. Thieves have increased their numbers stealing and killing for their own satisfaction. -The third apocalyptic horseman: Famine

Millions of dead bodies have surrounded me. The bodies are decaying. The stench is sickening me. I feel like vomiting. I feel weak. Until I saw some of the bodies standing up and starts to walk towards me. I tried to run but my legs feel weak. I tried to force it but still it doesn't move. I tried to scream but my voice was all out. I tried to jump but my feet stuck. As they come closer, I closed my eyes. I felt their skin warping around me. The bodies are hugging me. Only to my surprise my fear faded away. Instead of death, I felt life. Instead of hunger I was filled. Instead of screaming I laughed. Instead of sadness I felt joy. Instead of hell I felt like I was home. Have I become one of them? No, these people are my loved ones and they're asking me to save them. -The fourth apocalyptic horseman: Death

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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Sun Sep 23, 2007 11:11 pm

I found myself once dreaming. It was about a beautiful young girl who never seem to show her face to me. I usually followed her every afternoon still no luck. Till one day, I saw her laughing. She saw me. She stood up smiling. As she got closer, my heart beats fast the closer she was to me. When she was finally in front of me she said” I never wanted you to see my face for one reason. And yet here you are still trying your luck as you follow me every afternoon.”

To my surprise she knew that I had followed her.

“Do you want to know why I didn’t want you to see my face?” she asked

I was struck by silence and was finally able to come to my sense. “If there is a reason then yes I want to know why.”

“I didn’t want you to remember who I was. And what I am to you.” She told me as she began to cry

“What you do mean remember you? Have we met before?” I asked with a serious face.

“It’s better for you not to remember. It’s for our own benefit.” She turned away but surprisingly I caught her hand as she was about to run. She turned her head. I saw her eyes streaming with tears. “That innocent face looked familiar to me” I said to myself.

At that moment, my head began to hurt. I was able to let go of her hand. And instead of running, she hugged me. She finally said “I’m your past wife. I am the queen of the 8th kingdom. I was the one who killed you during your past life.”

At that same moment, the pain faded. I began to see images that were related to my past life. It was my time of awakening. She was sent by the angels of the 3rd Heaven to awaken me from the eternal slumber. I held her face. I felt her tears as she cried. That was when I said “It’s been too long since we last met my dearest queen. As time passed, I began to feel that you were somehow my greatest mistake but at the same time my greatest victory. I was confused and finally you have settled me down to one answer. I have died yet you resurrected me. I was lost yet you have found me. I was alone and you saved me from eternal darkness.”

At that very moment, I woke up!

Another compiled random story...

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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Mon Sep 24, 2007 6:20 pm

You made that?
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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Mon Sep 24, 2007 6:58 pm

Why? If i said no? What will be your reaction? And if I said yes would it be any different?

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PostSubject: Re: (Updated)Manga for DBTI - Batch 2007-2009   Tue Sep 25, 2007 10:33 pm

@AviosWindrider: Yes I made all that

Here you go guess I'll make another story:

But somehow I think I won't relate it with the manga's storyline unlike the two above.

“A day has finally passed after that ferocious battle from yesterday I thought I won’t be able to see you for another day.” said Krizen

“Don’t say such a thing you know that many people care about you. What do you think will happen if you ever left us…I mean them?” Hazel blushed as she made that mistake.

Not able to hear Hazel’s mistake Krizen asked “Does anyone really care for me? After all, I’ve got no more blood relatives neither do I have foster parents. I was even thinking about that as I was fighting with Krystal. I even got jealous when most of her so called “fans” were cheering for her. Well, I would admit that she’s really pretty but how com….”

“Ohh…come on. You’ve got friends you know. What about Stanley, Robert and Aj?” Hazel interrupted

“Yea, I guess so but you know there was also another reason why I won the fight yesterday. If you would analyze the fight, I was in total defeat even before the contest start but just because of that thought I was somehow able to use that weird energy that appeared yesterday.” Krizen replied then stared at Hazel’s eyes

*Blushing as she was caught by Krizen’s stare* “Wh….What would that be?” turning her face to the another direction

At that moment, Krizen walked towards Hazel. As he walks, Krizen said “It just that one reason.”

Hazel felt Krizen’s arms warping around her. “Wh…What are you doing?” still trying to hide her feelings Hazel asked as if she was clueless.

Krizen placing his mouth near Hazel’s ear said “That reason is you…”

Hazel blushed more than ever.

“I still want to see that funny face of yours. After all, I’m lucky enough to have you.” Krizen said in a hilarious manner.

Upon hearing what he said, she faced Krizen and slapped him. Tears began to fall from her eyes and that was when she ran away.

Surprised with what happened, Krizen looked up to the sky and said “I guess it was true.” smiled and continued “If you only knew.”

Waiting for Hazel to come back, He just slept at the same ground where they stood.

Soon after an hour or two, Hazel came back. At the same time, Krizen stood up, walked towards Hazel, and smiled.

Although hurt, Hazel also smiled back thinking “I’m lucky enough to have him as a friend I guess he wasn’t the one for me after all.”

As Krizen stopped in front of Hazel, he said “Now…it’s time.” He held Hazel’s face feeling her soft skin. “I guess I owed you an apology I really wanted to tell you earlier but it still wasn’t time” Krizen continued

Hazel began to blush once again but this time she finally knew that what the fortune teller was true. Hazel smiled and so did Krizen. At that moment, Krizen finally kissed Hazel.

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Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! I've got lots of extra time so I was able to do such story. Although I think I'm not that good yet in making love stories but I guess trying won't hurt for now. HAHAHA

-typed as thought. finished in 10 mins

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